I was really liked how you made use vector lines to simluat bullets going threw the air it looked good and not overdone and the ending was good.
Here are some tips you can use to make sprite animations more detail...
When the are shooting make a small little yellow bullet casing that and tween them so the spin out from the gun and fall on to the ground. You can see an example of this in my animation "Sprite mafia 3"
I have alot of high qaulity Gun sound effects on my website if you want to use in your next animation.
Thanks for the review, d00d! Your constructive critism is well written and I've made a note of them. Watch George's Bad Day now!
~The_Protagonist (I love your website, by the way.)
Ya this is shit
ya this is bullshit. Sprites aren't meant to mixed with Vector and stretched liked that.
The sound effects were horrible also.
If you wanna see something that should be in the MS collection
Check out my Metal Slug War one...
I don't think anyone can really decide how sprites are "meant" to be used. Apart from the ones who made them in the first place, I guess. My point is that everyone likes different things, and it seems like a lot of people liked this movie, so there you go. I broke your "sprite rules" and got away with it!
(Your movie is still kick ass though)
This is great almost like a real cartoon
But the scene where he was attacked looked a bit cheap.
You may of had difficulty or been lazy to make that part better.
But this is damn awesome some parts were Fluid animation.
Graphics - 8 meh
Style - Unique 10
Sound - Not very impressive
Overall very cool. But one word here the file size here is ridiculous for this. So ridicolous I had to decompile this thing just to see what the hell you did here. The sound is only about 200 KB.
I exported the frames... some 3 thousand of them I think. and THere friggen huge! You did something wrong here. I think didn't reusse the background you kept created a new one on each Frame or something resulting in this huge file size for such a small animation..
Not that great but I gave you a 2, out of pity if this is your first flash submission.
I'll give you tip, later on when your comfortable with flash. Learn about using the Mask effect (Masks) . Its worth it, you can make all kinds of cool effects with it.
Thatt felt almost surreal,,, almost like I could grab and touch them on my Monitor. very cool. But whatever they did made no sense and was rather non-entertaining.
Try something else. Maby a busy street and cars and stuff with chimmey smoke... all that stuff in that style.
Okay, I can do that.
The problem is if it seems to city like then people would assume I was trying to copy off paper sky, which is pretty similar to what you just described. But I will keep experimenting with the textures.
thanks for the suggestions
Very good. I see you used e.s Posmuous Pompeii. I've heard that song too many time from Street fight vs MK portal entry, this is the same song I declined to use in a fight flash I was going to make, hence I never finished it.
This was very good, You must of spent a great deal of hours and to make this. The song however is cliche now for me at least.
Standards of the Past
I don't understand why the rating is so high for this.
Perhaps this is a "Gem" from the past... right. This was put on here 7 years ago.
I don't know but maby 7 years ago this would be funny on the internet. Not anymore.
Honestly This should be just removed from this collection.
Everything has to be about the monkey. The poor littles monkies.
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